May 19th, 2008
Kiss You Goodbye
I just dug around my own personal website for about an hour now. I was just checking out all the foolish and nonsense stuff that I have once posted there. While looking around my own content there, I’ve found a poem, quiet nice poem with a couple of errors. I thought I might share it with you here guys.
The poem speaks about love again, this time, a broken heart will speak to you. Hehe. As this poem was one of the last verses that I have dedicated to the person I talked about in the latter post of mine here. Here it goes, just as the title says it. Kiss You Goodbye..
Kiss Yah Goodbye..
I am wounded, I am down..
I’ve been turned up from inside..
I am bleeding, I now mourn..
Can’t believe I’ve lost you tonight..
What in heck had I done wrong?
For all these errors, kept undone..
As I may not alter, our paths, our ways..
All I can do.. Is keep all those days..
Why is life so unfair?
Why`s there hatred and dispair?
Why oh why do I need..
To be hurt, and to bleed..
It’s difficult to understand,
and very hard to take..
You just don’t know what it caused,
all the pain all the heart ache..
I had waited for all time,
for you and your love to be mine..
But it seems that I’ve failed us..
and to move on now, it seems I must..
I know, it sounds very weird
Lots of mistakes in words assembled..
But don’t you feel what I have felt?
All I had that I have gambled..
And everything ends a tragic way
All is lost in a sudden,
need to get up my feet again,
as our story now, must end..
We used to treat ea other more..
Than we had ever done it before..
As it now has slowly faded..
and my love for you..
has ended…
great composition mate…….
though i feel Love is eternal…the physical expressions of affection may end in time…but the true essence lives on….even if she has gone her love resides in me and my love will always protect her……
thanx also for visiting my blog….c u soon
nyc
sure on the xlinks. opo pinay po ako. =)
i’ll add you up now
I’ll add you under my readers
Hope you comment here and there on my lovely poems
hi… thanks for the visit. care to exlink? let me know…
Very nice.
I added you now. Please add me too and comment back to verify.
Thanks, I’m glad you’ve liked it!
Break Up Poems: Kiss You GoodBye | Poetic Notes Journal…
This is a Poem written by yours truly a couple of months back when I was still down and was undergoing a poignant heartache.
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